ESL 100
Kyounghyun kim (kay)
Oct/08/2012
The army doesn’t
only protect their countries. For the military that means, every army learns
many various positive effects. As you know every Korean guy has to go military
service. I also finished my military service two years ago. My military life
was really impressive and effective. Actually before I was into the military
service, I was really childish in many ways. Because that time if I had some
problems, my parents always helped me. In addition, these ideas made me very
haughty. However after I was into the military service, I realized everything
of my thought was delusion. In the military service, I got most positive
effects and learn about many things such as courage, patience and cooperation
in my life.
Actually, when I was in
high school, I was really silent guy. For example, during the class, even
though I knew answer of the question, I couldn’t say anything because I felt
shame. Looking back on it now, that was quite a stupid behavior. Actually every
my behavior changed in the military service. For the first two months in my
military period, I also acted like my high school life. It used to embarrass me
all the time here is something that happened to me once. In military service, we had target
practice. When my turn had come and took my rifle, I felt
something wrong but I couldn’t say anything then I thought it will be ok.
However I was injured when my gun backfired during target practice. Thanks goodness I was not more badly hurt. After this event, my boss said to me “If you don’t express your opinion,
next time other people will be hurt.” That time I realized that I had to change
my personality. When I had some problems, I tried to do something for change my
personality.
In addition, I couldn't keep my resolutions longer than a few days
since I was in elementary school student. For example, when I was in middle
school student, my parent want to teach about play piano ant then they sent me
to the piano school. Actually, the first three days in the piano school,
everything was fun and interesting. However, after few days, I lost interesting
in my piano school life then I left that school. Nevertheless, I could change
this behavior after into the military service. All of the solider had to finish,
whatever happened that means when we start something, we have to finish. However
I didn’t finish what I was start since in my middle school. For this reason,
when I was into the military, I had trouble adjusting to my military life.
However I had big incident for change my lack tenacity character. One day, my
boss ordered to me cleaning the whole building then he wanted to finish until 5
pm. That time, I also said “I can finish cleaning building until 5pm”. The
first three hours, I worked hard. By the way, after six hours, I felt really
tired so I took the break nobody knows then I thought my boss don’t check the
building. At the five o’clock, I told my boss that finish cleaning whole
building. He was really angry when he checked the dirty building then he said
to me “you couldn’t take break and dinner until finish cleaning building. After
this situation, I could get patience.
Furthermore, I have
thought that I couldn’t need to other people’s help before I didn’t into the
military. I was really selfish. In the high school, I didn’t like group
homework because I thought I could finish by myself then I did alone. However
when I was into the military, I got the limit for my work. When I was working
for the military, it need to cooperation. So when I worked with other people, I
was really uncomfortable. For example, I also wanted to work by myself when I
got the work for repairing truck which was changing tire. First time, I tried
to change tire by myself but it was really heavy so I couldn’t move tire.
However I thought I settled the matter without anyone's help. Actually it had to
finish until five pm then at six o’clock, the truck had to go to different
place. However because of my selfish, every plan went to pieces. Finally, I
realize that if I did this work together, I could avoid harming other people.
To conclude, my experience into the
military effected every my life and character and then I realized before my
military life was really miserable life. I think the military is not only
protecting the country but also it is an opportunity to further develop myself.
In the military, I could learn courage, patience and cooperation. If I didn’t
into the military and then didn’t learn these positive effects, maybe I don’t
have any friends and my school life can be hard. Now I have many friends and I
am doing well at school because I learned these positive effects in the
military.
I waited for my first boy friend to finish the army service for twenty sixth months. Aren't I great?:)(Unfortunately, we broke up after that though.) So I understand what you want to say in your essay pretty well. I'm glad you didn't get hurt so much at the target practice!!
ReplyDeleteWOW, I can see how much the military training helps you! It's really great!
ReplyDeleteYes... I know some of childish guys attitude are changing much better when they done with military service. Some of my friends went to military service four years ago and they developed their ability and mind.
ReplyDeleteyou remind me my brother who went through army. He had hard time at the army, but the life changed my brother completely.(to good way)
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