Triet
Phan
ESL
100
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in translation
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Metal Horse
Cars and
freeways had the biggest impression on me when I first came to America. Cars
are everywhere such as on the roads, parking lots, and along the metered street
parking. Cars run on the road and on freeways, one behind another. I could
never imagine such a sight when I was in Vietnam. However, after spending
almost one year in America, the thing that I want so much is not having a car in
The United States. I just miss the moments when I used to a motorcycle in my
country, Vietnam. That sounds funny, but it is the truth. It is impossible to
have the exact feeling driving a car or a motorcycle in the United States. In
my memory, when I drive a motorcycle in Vietnam, there are three things that
make me miss it so much: the feeling of fresh air and the open road, the
flexibility of motorbikes, and the feeling of closeness.
The feeling
of fresh air and an open road when I ride a motorbike in Viet Nam is
incomparable. The way that the wind blows in my face is very exciting. In
addition, the wind touches me smoothly as a hand gently rubs my skin. Moreover,
riding on a motorbike is as if the world opens everything in front of your
eyes. However, compared with driving a car in Chicago, it feels like I am
driving in a metal box. Every space around you is full of metal, buttons, and
glass. Furthermore, sitting in the car makes me feel as if I am separate from
the outside world, and I cannot connect with the fresh air. On one hand, I ride
my bike traveling to the Lake Michigan in Chicago. It is certainly better
because I can see the beauty of the Lake and feel the fragrant smells from
flowers along both sides of the road. In addition, it is sunny, and the cool
wind blows gently, making my life enjoyable. On the contrary, jumping back to
drive a car is a different experience. In fact, controlling a metal box in a
crowded street and enjoying a beautiful view together is an impossible mission.
In fact, a
motorbike is smaller than a car, so it is easier for a motorbike to go around
town because motorbikes are more flexible. Especially, with small roads or alleys
in the downtown section of big cities, motorbikes are the most useful in traffic.
Furthermore, in a big city such as Chicago, it is very hard for me if I want to
find a parking space downtown or in popular neighborhoods. Nevertheless, with a
motorbike, I can easily find a parking spot because it does not need more space.
In addition, there are a lot of small diners and shops with only street
parking. They are very common in Vietnam, and I just can stop by and eat
without worrying so much about finding parking. Furthermore, if the road was
too small or marshy, motorbikes can prove that they are more flexible than
cars. For example, my friend drives a car and I ride a motorbike in a marshy
road, and unluckily, my friend’s car and my motorbike was trapped in a muskeg. Definitely,
my motorbike will easily get out of that trap with a little help. However, my
friend’s car needs more time and more people in order to get it out. Hence,
flexibility is another forte of motorbikes.
Another
reason that I love riding a motorcycle in Vietnam is the feeling of closeness,
and riding a bike together with a friend creates a feeling near and dear with
me. When I ride a friend with me on a bike, I can feel the stronger connection between
both of us. The fact that a bike’s saddle is usually small, means there is not
much space between two people on a bike. As a result, the space of our
conversation is smaller, and the small distance between two people makes us
friendlier. Especially when I go with my girlfriend, I can feel her warm breath
on my back. Moreover, I can feel her arms around my waist, and her head rest on
my shoulder. We drive together and have fun talking under the sky with million
of stars shinning. It is the moment that I can never forget in my life. On the
other hand, comparing with driving a car in Chicago, the distance between a
driver and a passenger is farther. Therefore, the warm arms, the warm breath on
my back, and the leaning against my shoulder disappear. Furthermore, all the
stars disappear because of a car’s roof. As a result, my feeling of closeness
disappears.
Coming back
to America, it is a country dominated by cars. It is so hard to find again the
beautiful time when I drove my bike around town. Sitting in a metal box and driving, they are
enough for me while I live in America. When I go back to Vietnam, certainly, the
first thing I will do is go ride my motorbike to catch that feeling again: the
fresh air, the flexibility, and close feeling with my friends when sitting on a
motorbike together. In Vietnam, a motorbike is nicknamed a metal horse.

Wow, I can imagine the feeling such as freedom i think. My country is the same to here, but It will be nice to have something like your country.
ReplyDeleteYeah, if you have a change to visit my country. It wont disappointed you.
DeleteTriet, I think you can still ride your motorcycle in the U.S. expect any big city like Chicago. Pitifully, I think you were really sad when you lost the warm breath of your girlfriend. However, I hope you can enjoy your metal horse in the U.S. with a missing warm breath.
ReplyDeleteHaha, thanks you Chloe! It is hard to enjoy riding motorcycles with ton of cars around you in United States. Probably you are right, :)) sometimes, it is hard to find the old memories and felling!
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